The
T
I
P
of my
sequenced fingers;
blank with jarring notions
of [illiterate] clumsy ink,
ponder the solitude
of one so
Profound.
Since pens are blasé with
the "meaning of
Life."
Author notes
Erm this is what my odd mind got from of the "image."
I think I took it more literally than anything...but hey.. here you go...
In a list
A contest entry
- Write about this. by MessedupMarionette.
700 points, ended May 5, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So... the image is the white box with the text ' this is profound ' in it? Honestly, I would be blanking it I looked at that
The poetic translation of not yet written ink as illiterate is very well found
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Heh. Awesome. I think I like this because it's unlike the other pieces--they all just wrote about something they thought was profound, and you took it literally. Kudos for originality. And the poem's pretty cool too. I'm happy
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Unique and brilliant! I love it despite anything you say or anyone else does. Plus this is the first time I've ever seen "blasé" on AP. ^__^
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Rightly worded, clearly written, innovative use of punctuation. I do like the hermetism of the poem where the subject is not clear but doesn't really matter. A poem is just words rightly chosen for their sounds or nomen, and I guess sound prevailed here. I think you wrote a courageous piece.
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yeah, so this was like [w0w]!!!
great job on this peice! -
A creative and expressive write! A talent you are
This had a nice flow and an intriguing structure, certainly my pleaure to read. Good luck in this contest! ~Tia
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