i wanna be in love
i love bein' in love, yeah
like spinning in circles
laughing at the sky
and if i fall down,
i don't even cry
to be another's obsession
consumed in loving possession
yeah, that's the kind of love i want
wakin' up in lover's arms
tangled in sheets and teddy's on the floor
stereo's still playing all night it seems
clothes paving the way from the front door
peeking cold toes into steam
hot stream pulsing sore muscles
i wanna be loved like that again
i wanna be in love
i love bein' in love, uh-huh
spitting in the wind
and not even caring
cause I'll pretend it's raining
when the winds blow
and boughs break
it's love i want to make
and if my soul should go
far away from here
loving is never ever a mistake.
A contest entry
- Needing To Be Loved by shysky.
450 points, ended April 21, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Going for a song
more of a song this one, but is fine, you are always diverse and some of the best songs have been littered with poetry.
The second verse is my favourite to.
James
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This Is amazing dragon... something I can relate too one hundred percent. Thie Imagery and content of this piece add to making It a most fabulous piece of poetry. I like the way you think.
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Wow, this is really good! The second verse especially paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. This is a great job, keep writing!
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princess
thanks for giving this a read. was feelin' it especially hard tonight. hope you're having a good one.
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