Silently, securely
I seek that which can satisfy me
As I satisfy another
I desire to submit to the serenity that
Defines me
Doesn’t restrain and doesn’t confine me
But enlightens me
I reach to a place that brings the art
Of my heart
To serve each and every nerve of his being
Knowing his being is what I exist for
Nothing giving me more pleasure
Than to be what he desires
Reaching every part of his heart and soul
Delving into depths that are unknown to us both
Bringing it all to the surface
To make it real
Knowing I will be that serenity
Submission
Where the transition of what I desire
Fulfills what he desires
Serenity
Where the eternity of the infinite will
Of pleasure is a
Treasure of incomparable wealth
The physical essence of his presence
Is merely a reflection of the
Connection that’s deeper than the
Surface of the natural eye
I cannot be any other way for him
His fulfillment is my journey
into myself
He makes me who I am
I follow his lead
His physical essence blinding me
With a longing that burns within
Being nothing else but what holds
His attention
This is what I crave
The serenity of my submission
Isn’t for anyone’s
Definition
Or understanding, but it’s his commanding
Of my intrinsic nature
A nature that feeds him,
Pleases him, nurtures me
And guides me into mental
Ecstasy
Which brings him the physical pleasure
When I am in that state of mind
His pleasure controls all that I do
All That I believe
It is what sustains me
His power over me gives me my strength
Defining my being, thus giving him all
That I am and more
Pleasing him is my soul's desire
My submissive serenity
Author notes
A great collaboration with BlackRabbit..
Thank you ......
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I love it
and have shared it with my submissive...she too has found herself in serving me....your work captures the spirit of true submission, the heart of servanthood... -
Wow!!!!!!!
That's all I can say. I'm speechless. This is an incredibly sensual collaboration from two gifted poets.
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Absolutely a delicious and awesome piece! Wow! Makes me stop and think of someone that I want to fulfill these words with
You two write beautifully together! Very well done! This just smokes!
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*SHIVERS*
"A nature that feeds him,
Pleases him, nurtures me
And guides me into mental
Ecstasy"
"His power over me gives me my strength
Defining my being, thus giving him all
That I am and more
Pleasing him is my soul's desire
My submissive serenity"
True blessed sensuality that hit a deep note in this man's soul. This tastfully erotic faucet of the diamond that is woman shines beautifully as you desribe both love and lust colliding and mixing in a perfect blend that sends shivers down the spine of any red blooded man. Now that is submissive the way submissive was meant to be, with a slefless love behind it. Any good man would dearly appreciate this and take good cae that his dominance be done with a healthy degree of equal love behind his every touch as well. Sensually firm yet loving is the only way a man should take a woman of such fine selfless passion. I've been refraining from commenting other's poems in light of recent trajedy until a better time but upon reading this great piece I just couldn't resist commenting. I LOVE IT so well I must bookmark it.
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delightful and sweet
sounds like a trip into fantasy land with all the trimings and delightfulness. a trip that is unlike many, for ones do not want to share deeply as you two have done here. nice job.
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Very nice collab! hard to even tell two different hands were a part of this. Great job you guys.
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Incredible
This is truly a gift if we understand the essence of it. The emotional, physical,and mental bond between a man and a woman. Great write that I truly enjoyed from the beginning to end and I thank you two for sharing it with me...
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Profoundly Inspiring!
I desire to submit to the serenity that
Defines me
Doesn’t restrain and doesn’t confine me
But enlightens me
I love those lines.
This entire poem was masterfully written.
It speaks to an inner code between man and
woman that's yet to be understood.
The facade and continual role playing makes
it virtually imposible to be the way you
discribe in this deliciously honest and raw poem.
Its like an awakening.
Man and woman have been emotionally in
slumber for so long.
Your poem gives hope to the reality of
true love and affection.
The image that appeared in my mind is of
Adam alone in creation. Then God putting him
to sleep and taking from him to make a
companion. I believe this awesome gift was
lost in both their disobedience to Gods law.
The good part is that love can conquer anything.
This was indeed a masterpiece of affection
and love. By far one of your best yet.
I'm thoroughly impressed. Well done my lady!
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What a primal palce of serenity you have tapped in to...but of course, and shoul those of us who believe this, happen on our twin soul whose ultimate is the same as ours, then..and only then is passion at it purest and ecstatic intent.
whew, damn.....gooder gf.
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Very Nice
Submissive Serenity, again this is Wonderful. Much Passion and Emotions flow all thru this Collabo.
Ephiphany
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WOW JUST PLAN WOW
you have penned one serious poem here my sister~~~I do believe my glasses have steam on them
...Im lost for words so just plan WOW!!!!!
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His fulfillment is my journey into myself. We must always understand that what we do for another is a journey, and a discovery of who we are. If we didn't have elbows, we couldn't feed ourselves but others could feed us. A mental ecstacy is the best kind. Great poem. Thank you.
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WOW!
Love the way that both of you did a fabulous job in creating and erotic write using such sensual soft words. I felt the [passion] and [emotions] soar from the pages.
You also described submission in a delicate loving way that fullfills each other's wants and needs.
" I desire to submit to the serenity that
Defines me
Doesn’t restrain and doesn’t confine me
But enlightens me"
GREAT VERSE!
Great Write
Take Care
Bo
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wonderful
I think that submission in this beautiful poem is a gift of love and so it is a gift from a kind and caring heart made perfect when received by a kind and caring heart...so very well done here...PK
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Breathtaking
Beautiful write -
I will have to read this a few more times, chack for typos, punctuation, grammatical errors, hairs, dust, germs, I must go over this again and again until I am sure it is OK. I'll let you know when I am done. Three bunnies for this.
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Wow, what a wonderful piece you have
penned here! I love the imagery that
you left me with. Well done and thanks
for sharing it here! Keep up the
great work.
Jeremy0826 -
The esscence of the primitive, in desire and need.
Foams from within the lines here.
In the end stripped bare of all societies chains,this is the nature bound within us all to act upon in unchained emotion and physical passion!
A perfect rendition in an open heartfelt, want! With that touch of perfect lust upon the page.
I for one wish to be laid within her arms.
Excellent write!
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this was such a tasteful "erotica" piece! It was soo real, in that love and intimacy between two people that really belong together, and share that special connection, like no other! You guys did a damn good job at capturting such an intimate and yet tastefully provocative moment. loved it!!!
my fav stanza was:
"The physical essence of his presence
Is merely a reflection of the
Connection that’s deeper than the
Surface of the natural eye " -LOVED THIS!!!
Rianna
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wow this is amazing...im utterly stuck for words well done you to what a way to go well done xxxx
laura xxxx
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First let me say girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl that pic is right on! yummy choco! And the write is so sensual and full of wanting! You describe the ache and want and desire so well. I couldn't have said it better myself and thank you so much for sharing this with me! Keep that pen flowin lovely!
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Holy, moly cow...I'm dumbstruck..an authentic rendition..wonderfully executed. no "let's play dress up" here. Sensual, provocative, high seduction.
No vulgarites needed...wish more would understand..
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"Serenity, Where the eternity of the infinite will, Of pleasure is a Treasure of incomparable wealth," I like this part...love is more then any wealth...it is wealth...great romantic poem of love, thanks for sharing
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OK am still thinking of this, and i want to give ya one of my trophys for this......>>>takes one off Whoochi's shelf and presents it to the both of you!
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Well well, you just keep getting Hotter and Hotter and now ya have a partner in that heat! woohoo, what a wonderful collab, this is truly one of the best that i have ever seen, it actually left me breathing heavy and rapidly...and the last line...."Pleasing him is my souls desire My submissive serenity.." Beautiful...My fav has to be this..." The physical essence of his presence
Is merely a reflection of the
Connection that’s deeper than the
Surface of the natural eye ...
man this just Rocks and knocks my socks off...Excellent to the both of you......you need to write these more often! Woohoo!
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The pleasure was mine, no doubt.
Your talent is a joy to experience!!
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rock on wicha bad self!
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