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My Love The Statue

I molded your form
To match a cold heart.

A twin gaze of marbles
Representing disregard.

The upraised pinions
Mocking a lack of spirit.

A smile you have not
Why would you want it?

To love a thing of such beauty
From the dirt at your feet.

Such beauty entrancing
A fitting end, I think.

I gave you granite
To match a cold shoulder.

I placed you at a grave
Because you won't care anyway.

And who would remember?

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  • Skitzofreinian
    April 20, 2007
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    amazing
    sometimes you realy bowl me over with something you write