I don't know who you are
I don't know your name
or what you look like.
How your hair feels
or the smell of your skin
the taste of your lips
but I'll find you soon
and when I do I won't be afraid
I hold you close
kiss you
hold your hand as we walk down the street
the things I long for so much
I will share with you,
Author notes
something I wrote as I was falling asleep
Please tell me what you think
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very romantic and tender...I can remember feeling this way before I found my true love. I can only tell you that no matter how long it takes, It all pales in comparison to the amount of love and satisfaction that comes from getting it right. peace and light, kendal
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Very sweet. The one you will find will be the person that will get something great. Good read. Good poem.
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Jarrett.
I loved it, you did a wonderful job. I hope you and I both can find that someone to do those things with..who knows.
♥♥
Lex
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I think you have a typo on the first line..."you" should be "who"...
This is how I feel at the moment. I can't seem to find the right person so I'm always searching for the one special person. If you do have that person, congrats... and if not, good poem and I hope you find that special someone.
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Good dream...hope you find this speacil someone...I think line one needs to be changed, you have, "I don't know for you are," I think you mean, :I don't know who you are," other then that, it is dreamy..thanks for sharing
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Sounds as if you are searching for someone special. Line one, did you mean I don't know who you are? You will know when you find this person and your dreams will have come true.
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