Savored sun…
sliding through the crevice
of surrender,
slipping to the sea
near fleeting shoals
Soft ripples,
ravished by each streak
of liquid light,
soaring
on sheer wings
of feathered bronze
I breathe your flame,
drinking from deep currents
of my gender,
posing
in persuasion’s
rousing moon…
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April 17, 2007
A contest entry
- Tantalize me with your sensual words. by Angel With No Halo.
450 points, ended April 22, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Annie,
Wow! I have to agree with the others, so much imagery here, and it puts you within the reader's thoughts. I thank you always for sharing your talent here, and your wonderful heart! Much love, and congrates on the silver!
Your forever friend, Timothy 
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I love the imagery in this. I especially loved your metaphorical usage....
"drinking from deep currents
of my gender,"
This line alone impressed me immensely. To drink from your gender.. what an awesome way to express that without being vulgar in ANY way... Perfect write here hon. Thank you for entering and good luck!!
~Krys~
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Well you've given the host what they expressed wanting on topic. And in ero terms on a soft scale.Hit the mark so to say,and in poetic terms.Great job.
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Very tantalizing, very sensual poetry, yet as usual with elegance, panache and style - your trademark! Loved the alliteration of the s-sounds too...sssssoooo sexy, sensual and soft, my friend. I would like an evening like the one you've sculpted here!! Magical poetry - totally captivating and beautiful
~ Nicolette
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Very Tantalizing indeed,
very sensual and full of many lovely persuasions
Your muse is very soft and wonderful,
Thanks for sharing,
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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