A consuption of while cant always be worth,
A thought never known while seaching for
freedom and thought.
Turned out as a high way.
A setting of disbelief, never running back.
Signs? No.
Always a misconception of polarity and the
positives.
Its just an asset.
What of this Earth revolves other than time
and brutality?
Thinned out, dissappearing.
Ways of living are noncentral and
misconceived.
Fault can point and specify,
not compensate.
So shifts the lights and the shades,
the ground sparks and fades brown.
Thus lives the life of the universe;
Settling and wanting a bigger flame.
Again, fault cannot compensate.
Please tell me what you think
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a theme of a seemingly hopeless view of the world, yet the line "fault cannot compensate," repeated, could be seen as the basis for forgiveness. maybe there is hope, yet. i like your work.
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Thank you friend, much appreciated comment. Thank you for taking the time to analize my work, and appreciate it, it really means a lot.
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yup me and my mis spelled words and here you have big very well spelt words lol
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yup me and my mis spelled words and here you have big very well spelt words lol
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baby I love you so much snd I miss ya like no other
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k I understand I won't bug you about it no more k and call as soon as you wake up sunshine and ur mine cuz ur keeping me up only reason I stayed up was cuz there was a chance to talk to you well bella I love you good night my sweetheart
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are you going to call babe? and ok and ill help you move in stuff as long as I'm with ya k I love ya princess
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why do you say shit would start and ok i'll be up so don't hesitate to call me mi amor
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what thing do I exactly have to let go and if you think u can pls call me I love your voice
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what thing do I exactly have to let go and if you think u can pls call me I love your voice
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my phone cant msg so i have to write in this
hey bella I love you and can't get you out of my head and I don't want to anyway cuZ I love u in my mind I really miss talking with you for hours like we use to I really miss the old days I just wish it could be like that again I love ya my sunshine and I can't sleep call me that -
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babe im really having a hard time with this one i really don't comprehend it i really want to know what it means so i really would like feed back on this one and on the line of self centered that i didn't quite get k bella love ya
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