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I will live forever,

You can threaten my life all you wish.
All I will say is to go ahead and do it.
I know what it is like to love,
To hold the world in my arms and be loved.
I have traveled my country,
I have seen so many beautiful places.
I've met the most amazing people in the world (My friends).
Sure you can Stop my breathing,
You can keep my heart from beating.
However You will never be able to kill me.
See my friends will remember me,
I will continue to live in their memories.
Forever I will be alive with them.
Sadly enough for you,
You will just end up dying and dusty in history.
As just another common criminal.

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  • No one can snuff you out. You are too amazing to forget. Someone been threatening you or these just thoughts? Anyways great poem.

    LOVE YOUR GUINIE PIG


  • saseychik0688
    April 20, 2007

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    this is good will, i agree w/ carter-crazy your amazing too & i will never forget you.

    ~*~Sasey~*~


  • Uticajohnson
    April 19, 2007
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    sweeet

    doing good,


  • Love-Lee
    April 18, 2007

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    Awwwww

    Thank you!!! You are amazing too! That is why we will never forget you! I like it! It is great and soooo true!

    Love ya,
    Cheryl!!!


  • Mel-the-Believer
    April 17, 2007

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    Wow! This was awesome. I really loved it. Very true too, if you have wonderful people who love you, whey you die you'll live on in their hearts and minds. Wonderful poem here. I loved it. God Bless!

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