As I sit wating for you to call once again,
I know that I will have to have all of my words,
Carefully planned,
I need so much more that you have been giving me,
I just can't pretend that I'm happy anymore,
You said that you would change,
But your still the same as before,
You control my every move,
As if you have got nothing to lose,
I must not mean that much to you,
Since you act like our fights are nothing new,
I should have listened to my friends,
When they told me so long ago,
To break your heart,
Only now its me,
Who seems to be falling apart,
I blame you for all of my sleepless nights,
I blame you for our seemingly endless fights,
I haven't gotten any sleep,
I have spent my nights crying into my pillow,
For the past week,
But when I'm around others,
I have to smile,
As if I'm not bleeding inside,
Hopefully what I'm about to do,
Finally makes you realize.
Author notes
This is abt my boyfriend. Somewhat fictional...somewhat not. Ask questions if you like.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sweet
I like it a lot idk just the whole idea of it.. keep up the good writes
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GREAT
well well, i think this poem is one of your best so far (from a poetical point of view) beattiful flow of words, nice rhymes... great as always... keep up the good work...
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coooooool :)
wow i don't know what to say except it's full of emotin and it's a nice poem as usual. I love the rhyme it rocks... 1 luv



