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Love
Of God
Long lasting
Sing him one song
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Blessing from heaven
Liberty for all our souls
Almighty Lord I extol
At the golden gate
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Wonderful day
Accepting
Desire
Lord
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Author notes
This is a new style of form poerty created by Arkbear-
Beautiful style, Thanks Bear!.....novy
A contest entry
- *~ Poetry Formed V ~* by Arkbear.
400 points, ended April 26, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply Beautiful ~
What a lovely Arkquain you have penned ~
Perfect syllable count ~
Beautiful aesthetic appeal ~
Lovely message as well ~
However....
Some of your lines were a bit choppy and did
not allow me to read this as if it flowed off my tongue with ease....
...mostly the 3rd stanza ~
1.2 pts. deducted for that ~
Other than that...a lovely entry ~
The best to you in this contest Novy ~
Bear ~
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Your word shape is perfect! Stunning visually. This feel like a poem of praise sung to the Lord upon His second coming. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you for your entry ~
Thank you so much for your entry ~
I will review your entry for certain criteria
expected from this contest ~
If you do not hear back from me within 12 hours of the contest deadline, you should have nothing to worry about as long as EVERYTHING in the RULES have been followed ~
I will review syllable count just once,
AND, if there is/are any line/s missing a syllable/s,
I will let you know only ONCE!
I am looking forward to reviewing your entry ~
However, Judging will NOT take place until
closing of this contest, therefore, I will TRY not to read the Theme or Storyline until that time, BUT, sometimes I break my own rules and take a peek ~
The best of luck to you in this contest!
Sincerely,
Bear ~
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Thank you for your entry ~
Very nice Form ~
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this is a very nice one , i like it alot and it has a lot of meaning also , with the lord in our lives we always have wonderful days and love and feel peace in us , so we sing our praises of love unto him with glee and all its harmony , being free comes wit ha price that was paid on calvary a long time ago for you and me so praise and worship him continualy
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love it!! you did a great job!!! this was very unique!!! you did a great job!
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Very very nice
Love the pic and the title; the style is unique, this would make a great song, I think. I love the line, "wrapped around my soul". it's a memorable line. Good work friend. Walt.
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Wonderful write novy. full of beauty, faith and love. Good luck in the contest.
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Very well written and full of beautiful light. Jesus was a great prophet of his Times. His Goodness made him unique in an unprecedented conduct. Like these lines - Blessing from heaven
Wrapped around my old soul
very interesting Jesus certainly did claim to be the centre of all truth, drawing all types and conditions of humanity to himself. Blessings.
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Lovely penning, full of faith and hope and love, just a prayer softly said. Love, C
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