Time.
It never ends,
Doesn't stop,
Always continues,
Yet you can run out..
Author notes
Pondering a random thought...
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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makes me think you should'nt ever waste it.
make the most of what is you,
make the most of what you have.
i like your writing. alot...makes me think =]
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Thank you for your kind words..
And you're right..
Love ya
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Ev {o!-}
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This was awesome. You have quite a way with words, and I haven't figured out a way to express in a comment what I loved about this. This structure was not what I was expecting from a two-liner contest; don't worry, it is welcomed by the rules though. It is nice to have a little different format. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated..
I was kinda hoping it would fit the rules.. ;-)
Love
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Ev {o!-}
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This is so true, which I like about it. Isn't it terrible that we have to have things done on time? No matter how much time there is in the world, no matter how much time there will be left in the world...there is always something to be done. Wouldn't it be easier to have no pm or am? LOL But yeah...this is truly a good poem, and it's no lie. You did great!
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Thank you for your kind words..
Time is a strange thing...
There's another saying about Time, I'll publish it in a mo..
Love
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Ev
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Nice job with the ponderings. This is a wonderful short poem full of meaning. It is a message that we would all do well to remember.
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go figure, indeed. that is so true! good pondering!
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very true.... short but oow so powerfull... (waar kom jij vandaan dan?)
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Thank you for your comment!
Geboren in kampen, via Arnhem, Enschede, Hengelo, Midden oosten naar Engeland vertrokken..
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Time waits for no one as you clearly display in this write. We always think there is more...only to find that we have wasted much of it. There are no guarantees for tomorrows. Great visual and emotion in just a few lines. Best of luck to you in the contest. Dawn
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Ah, very perceptive..
Thank you for your kind words
Evert
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This is the best short poem I've read in a while, excellent thoughts here, put in poetic fprm well!
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Glad you liked it!
These lines were created during one of those nights, when the brain just meanders...
Love
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Ev {o!-}
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That is true! Never enough of it, shifting sands through our hands. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!
It was one of those stupid things a brain gets stuck on..
I'm better now. The fever has gone....... ;-)
Love
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Ev {o!-}
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