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Heaven's Golden Stair

Meet me by Heaven's golden stair, which you don't believe in
But I do; and I will save you there.

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I always wanted to expand on this, and had it placed with some other ideas, but I figured it would be great for this "Give Me A Two-Liner" contest.

Any comments are appreciated.

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    May 14, 2007

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    I am glad you entered before you expanded. This makes a powerful, loving two-liner; I am sure it will make a just as powerful and loving full-length poem. I loved the imagery you used in this write. Thanks for sharing.
    -BabyBear


  • PoetryDove
    May 2, 2007
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    Yes, it is a great two line poem! You've definately picked the right contest to enter this in.
    "But I do; and I will save you there."
    That's a great line! I really like this a lot...you have a wonderful write here. I could read this over and over again, it's just so sweet.
    You did great and good luck!
    ~Poetrydove~