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The Getaway

I hear you coming
and rush back to the kitchen,
get the dishes finished up,
and dinner places set on the table.

We all sit silently eating,
a fork is dropped,
a child shivers,
because who knows
what this minor occurance just caused.

Sigh of relief,
he's too tired to fight tonight,
so we finish eating,
the kids are bathed and put to bed

The next morning I rise,
lunches are packed,
kisses are given,
and silent prayers are answered,
he's too tired to fight this morning.

Six o'clock comes,
and there he is,
boss cracks his back,
and he cracks yours in turn.

There's the familiar

Yearning for the escape,
but his pistol has already told you
that you can't go anywhere

searching for the door, but finding it locked,
how do you make the getaway?



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  • Maybe Anastasia
    April 22, 2007

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    oh boy. I was a little confused at first but this is great. u wowed me great write. The emotion is there! thanks for the entry.


  • My Darkness
    April 20, 2007
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    awesome ending.. wow, good stuff! good luck in the contest...


  • Cemetery Rose
    April 18, 2007
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    Wow. That's a pretty powerful piece. Good luck!