a myriad of colors
cap my busy head.
colors here;
thoughts there;
mixing somewhere in between,
into livid inspiration,
then, transcending upward
to the forgotten land.
with silently...
beating heart
squeezing gently at each
inconvenience:
to tragic blue,
or tormented red,
even mottled green
-empathy hidden by
apathy
to an artist's pallet
tickled
by the Creator's brush.
two colors mix
to form treasured child,
of paling traits
and saturated hues:
the perfect tone for
splattered canvas.
and brilliant colors
reveal candied humor
at every fade or blend,
with darkened spots
(a bit unsavory,
and unsightly)
not chaste but still
a favored shade.
it's all the tinge of me.
Author notes
Patent Pending is an awesome group
I have pink-ish, purply red hair. ^___^
I think too much, but am so forgetful.
I appear cold sometimes.
I don't like to see other's hurting though.
My family means so much to me.
I way too many things amusing, and my sense of humor can be a bit morbid at times, but it still makes for a happy life.
I'm wacky, brainy, sometimes zany.
Thanks for reading!
A contest entry
- Who Are You??? For BIG POINTS :) by GiftedPsychosis.
4000 points, ended May 23, 2007, 74 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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this is a truely impressive poem. i really love it. i admire that you can carry the same image throughout the poem
magnific.
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I agree with your statement about Patent Pending.
Your poetry is absolutely great. [Gah, I'm a push-over.]
"to an artist's pallet
tickled
by the Creator's brush.
two colors mix
to form treasured child,
of paling traits
and saturated hues:
the perfect tone for
splattered canvas."
^That stanza blew me away. 'to form treasured child' is a different image. I was a little confused by it, but in a good 'This makes me think' kind of way.
Best of luck in your contest.
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That stanza was meant to be simpler, for it's about my family ( I have a lot of nieces and nephews), but it's all up for interpretation. Thanks for reading.
P.S.- You being a push-over makes me feel good about myself though.
An artist's ego?
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Good Job!
This is really creative and cool. I love all of the colors. It's neat how you portrayed yourself as a piece of art work. Thanks for entering and good luck! -
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Thanks for the interesting and creative contest!
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I love it. That is real poetry: not just a bunch of rhyming words, but a real work of art. all luck to you in the contet you entered!
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Thanks so much!
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