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Untold Blessings

May
you reap
many joys
of tomorrow.
~~~
As your life unfolds,
find untold blessings to share,
trees planted, with fruit to bear.
Seeds of love shall bloom.
~~~
Let His Love shine,
within your
loving
heart.



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  • CountryCousin
    May 1, 2007

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    This is well done.

    This is very typical of your excellent writing and you did it so well. I agree with planting things and just planted more flowers in my garden.


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    Gorgious ~

    Simply stunning ~

     

    The aesthetic appeal is almost flawless ~

     

    The Art to inspire this write is splendid ~

     

    I appaud you for keeping the flow throughout

    this write from one stanza to the next ~

     

    Lovely presentation with the exception

    of the very last word, obstructing the beauty

    which this form should possess ~

     

    .8 pts deducted for that ~

     

    Other than that, a most beautiful entry

    my Sweet Sandy ~

     

    The best of luck with all these

    wonderful entries I have read thus far ~

     

    Bear ~

  • mcheadle
    April 18, 2007

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    WHAT WONDERS YOU ARE WRITTING

    YOUR LOVE FOR OTHERS AND HIM BEAM LIKE A RAY OF HIS LIGHT BLESS YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTY I TIP MY GLASS OF MILK TO YOU. YOU MAKE ONES DAY START OUT ON THE UP SIDE AND THEY CAN GO TO SLEEP IN CONTENTMENT


    • Sandygram
      April 18, 2007
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      LOVELY COMMENT

      Thank you so much for the nice comment. I hope you have some cookies to go with that glass of milk. Your words are very uplifting and bring a smile. Thank you. Hope your day is going well. Many Blessings!! You take care, Sandy


  • Frozentearz
    April 18, 2007

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    There were some beautiful thoughts written into this
    and I enjoyed the inspiration it made me feel this am morning as I enjoy my cup of coffee,
    Thank you for shairng this delight,
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • sublimewriter
    April 18, 2007

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    superios write! short and powerful. choice of words is genius!

  • cherchezlafemme
    April 18, 2007

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    Superior! So few words and so much grandeur The choice of words such as unfold, untold and bloom, reap - sacredness in higher needs of transcending self extending in conversations and aspersions of the heart. Respect and reverence in sense of appreciation. Regards


  • Arsenic-
    April 17, 2007

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    Very neat my friend! I haven't seen a concrete poem in a while. You do honer the creator and creation with this one, and it reminds me of a star in a way. Well done.


    • Sandygram
      April 18, 2007
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      Nice Comment

      Thank you Michael. A very nice comment. Bless you my friend, Sandy

  • Arkbear gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Not sure what happened to my comment ~

    Thank you so much for your entry ~

    I will review your entry for certain criteria

    expected from this contest ~

    If you do not hear back from me within

    12 hours of the contest deadline, you

    should not have anything to worry about,

    as long as EVERYTHING in the

    RULES have been followed ~

    I will review syllable count many times,

    AND, if there is/are any line/s missing a syllable/s,

    I will let you know only ONCE!

    I am looking forward to reviewing your entry ~

    However, Judging will NOT take place until

    closing of this contest, therefore,

    I will TRY not to read the Theme

    or Storyline until that time.....however,

    .....sometimes I get tempted to break

    my own rules and take a peek ~

    SMILE...God loves YOU! 

    The best of luck to you in this contest!

    Sincerely,

    Bear ~

    • Sandygram
      April 17, 2007
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      Dah!!! I Goofed.

      Hello Bear, So sorry, I accidently posted twice, once before I had the background chosen, so I deleted one. Your comment must have been on the first one. So sorry my dear friend.

  • June-bug
    April 17, 2007

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    excellent

    Very pretty write Sandy, very light on the heart and eyes in the message of blessings of life yet to be. Like the form. Enjoyed


  • thelordreigns gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This new form of Arkbear's is really prompting some wonderful writes. This is wonderful Sandy.

    - joanne


  • gullionmar
    April 17, 2007

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    awesome

    very beautifully written as wit all of your writing a wonderful pleasure to read so great a talent have a great day sandy,mary


    • Sandygram
      April 18, 2007
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you Mary for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. You take care, Sandy


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Isn't this a lovely new form of poetry created by Arkbear? You have written such a great entry for this contest - loved the message you share with us in these lines.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Most wonderfully beautiful, Sandy!
    I wish you all the very best in this contest
    Many hugs,
    Sandy

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