|Late Night New York Party Scene|
Grinding up on the floor
Anybody who takes their dirty claim
You're their whore
[[Where's your dignity dahling?]]
Your pop,lock&drop.it is so sophisticated
If only you wouldn't fall through
the cracks of a love life (lie)
New man every week!
You live by the saying
"Men should be like Kleenex
`soft`, ^^strong^^ and dis-pos-able"
You don't need a man
You're F!R!E!E!
Why destroy that?
{"You wanna know a little secret?"}
Sleep Around Sally
is a b|r|o|k|e|n down beauty whore
Her licorice dreams of plastic happiness
washed away with her [self]-respect
"All you need is love"
Not me you say
When deep inside it's all you LONG for
But that hooker at the crossroads
of Main Street
Will n.e.v.e.r be strong
Not until she mixes a martini
*Come on baby*
Carpe Diem!
Author notes
'CRUSH CRUSH CRUSH'
A contest entry
- ♥ -|B|r|o|k|e|n|-{W.o.r.l.d} [go look-lots of options] by Dead Star--x.
525 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - dirrty pretty please by Aquamarine..
600 points, ended May 20, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ++[[ ♥ Dirty Pretty ♥ ]]++ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended May 25, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bottle cap Sunglasses & Whorrrrerific Business by LucyLightning.
600 points, ended July 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I especially loved this part.
"Sleep Around Sally
is a b|r|o|k|e|n down beauty whore
Her licorice dreams of plastic happiness
washed away with her [self]-respect"
Good luck!
<3BD9 -
"[[Where's your dignity dahling?]]
Your pop,lock&drop.it is so sophisticated
If only you wouldn't fall through
the cracks of a love life (lie)
New man every week!
You live by the saying
"Men should be like Kleenex
`soft`, ^^strong^^ and dis-pos-able""
You're wonderful.
Really,
Your stuff is amazing.
Great job <3 -
oooooooooooo so lovely!!! =]] LOVEEEEEEEEE IT! LOVE IT! =]]]]] Good luck in the contest!
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Felch.
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hmmm. nicely done. lovely write. =]
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wow....breathtaking.....i love it......finalists for you.........good luck
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oh gosh..
i love dirty pretty..
and the images you give
and the ralitly of us all longing for love..
very nice dax!
<3-XxshotxX
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Grinding up on the floor
Anybody who takes their dirty claim
You're their whore
[[Where's your dignity dahling?]]
that beginning made everything else amazing!
xoxo,
Annie
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Sleep Around Sally
is a b|r|o|k|e|n down beauty whore
Her licorice dreams of plastic happiness
washed away with her [self]-respect
the flow of that was a m a z i n g & the words thrown together made that stanza stand out the most ♥ thanx for entering & good luck
PrettyX -
"But that hooker at the crossroads
of Main Street
Will n.e.v.e.r be strong
Not until she mixes a martini
*Come on baby*
Carpe Diem!"
i loved this last part of the poem!!!
great write! -
this is fucking awesomeness...i really digged this.. this is great.i loved this..great write and great job..bravoooo Heather
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Your pop,lock&drop.it is so sophisticated
If only you wouldn't fall through
the cracks of a love life (lie)
New man every week!
You live by the saying
"Men should be like Kleenex
`soft`, ^^strong^^ and dis-pos-able"
Fucking BUAH!!!
You are getting soo good at DP
Love it doll!!!
Love you bb face!!!
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