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Forbidden Fruit

My wanting tongue,
darts to moisten
suddenly dry lips.
With eyes of lust
I gaze longingly
at your strong hands.
Conjuring images
of what great pleasures
they can bring.

With my thoughts alone,
I caress your lips,
And wonder at their taste.
My eyes wander
down your form,
and my mind follows
blindly.

As you move closer,
the warmth of your body,
reaches out
and blankets me
in want, and need.

A slow heat rises
and my nerves tingle,
with pure desire.
My mouth waters
in anticipation
of that teasing taste
of all that could be.

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  • thelizardking
    May 19, 2007
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    two words come to mind reading this: beautiful and sensual. i especially loved the title, it fits it perfectly

  • Napoet
    May 19, 2007

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    My first thought was how wonderful it is to imagine the pleasures that wait in someone we may not even know.The stranger fantasy...it's delicios...Bravo!!