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You say you want to know about Me?

You say you want to know about me?
Well get ready for a little story.

Charmingly simple yet overly complex i must be,
for i strive to be quite gentlemanly.

Lonely yet always friendly,
drifting from friend to friend,
you see.

A voracious reader i have always been,
and will always be.

Far more intelligent,
though dimwitted i do appear to be.

A dark shell that holds a pearl within.

Author notes

'Patent Pending is an awesome group'I dont think i used "the" at all in it.lol.

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  • slipperssun gold member
    July 20, 2007

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    this is very well done without using the word THE at all... i can see why it made a trophy write...
    cheers
    Jen


  • Senior09
    May 4, 2007

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    Wow thats amazing...I always use "the" lol. But congrats with that. I like your poem I really like this part " Lonely yet always friendly " its kind of like you are but you arn't. Or a little bit or nothing. But goodluck in the contest.

    Autumn


  • FelineMuse
    April 25, 2007
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    Voracious reader, eh?

    Fantasy, I presume.. Any favorite authors?


    • Hiddenspaces
      April 25, 2007
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      are you sure you want to ask that question.think about it.personal collection of over 500 books.thats just is what i keep in my room.that is a rough estimate there are proly more in storage but if you want to continue i will answear.lol.


      • FelineMuse
        April 25, 2007
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        Bring it on..

        Only 500? I think I have that many in one of my series..

        • Hiddenspaces
          April 25, 2007
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          bs.the only ppl i can think of haveing more than a hundred would be R.A. Salvatore or Piers Anthony.kids series and plays dot count.lol

          • FelineMuse
            April 25, 2007
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            Mine is bigger..

            Hehe... I've read a bunch of Piers Anthony and RA Salvatore. Seriously, though, my house is overfilled with books, even after we weeded out the ones we didn't like.

            • Hiddenspaces
              April 25, 2007
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              i have read all of their books.lol.plus i go to hastings and barnes and noble and other book stores and just sit down in there and read a book til i get bored.and these are all mine.not a comunity(not your like your families."even after we weeded out the ones we didn't like")so ha i win by default that mine is my own personal collection and yours is shared w/other ppl.lalalalalalala(m victory song.lol.)

              • FelineMuse
                April 25, 2007
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                Eh.

                I tired quickly of Salvatore and Anthony. Mercedes Lackey, Tanya Huff, Terry Goodkind, Terry Pratchett, and Laurell K. Hamiliton are more to my taste..

                • Hiddenspaces
                  April 25, 2007
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                  lacky,goodkind,hamiliton...anita couldnt gewt enough guys around her to screw could she?lol.plus Robert Jordan,David and Leigh Eddings,all of the star wars books(to many authors),jhon marco,mitchel gramh,tolkien,neil shusterman,terry brooks,turdi canavan,margaret weis and tracy hickman,plato,aristotle,T.A. baron,anne rice,all of the forgotten realms books(well most of them)....cant think of anything else off the top of my head.lol.

                  • FelineMuse
                    April 25, 2007
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                    Jordan good,love David Eddings, couldn't get into Brooks, read some of Weis/ Hickman, Anne Rice bores me.. I also like Jim Butcher, Harry Harrison, Anne McCaffrey, Charlaine Harris, Kim Harrison, Tamora Pierce (sadly, I've read most of the young adult section), Robert Asprin, Brian Jacques... Too many to list right away. Many of them I checked out from the library, so I suppose they don't count in our little contest.

                    • Hiddenspaces
                      April 25, 2007
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                      all those i named and own.lol.haha.of course they dont count.remember im cruel.loli to have read alot of the young adult section.lol.and i hate brian jacques with a flippin passion.*growls^99999*


  • Lost In Dreaming
    April 18, 2007
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    Love it brooksy! TTYL
    meg


  • purpledragonfly
    April 17, 2007

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    Good Job!

    Extra points for no the lol !! This was a short yet descriptive write... We love the last line !!! Please change rEEder to rEAder for us and we'll come back later and you won't appear as dimwitted LOL !
    Good Luck and Thanks for entering! DF & -GP


    • Hiddenspaces
      April 17, 2007
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      fixed it for you.you had me laughing through the whole comment.lol.
      H.

      • purpledragonfly
        April 17, 2007
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        Well, you had us laughing while we were reading It was so funny --- we got a kick out of your quick typing and it gave us the giggles and then you would put the word dimwitted in there ... so we really laughed ... - thanks for the silliness of the evening!!! And we knew what you meant we aren't really counting for spelling , but thanks for fixing it dragonfly

        • Hiddenspaces
          April 17, 2007
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          well i must confess.i put that like that because i have a fairly large sense of humor.lol.but then yall said to change it so you know i kinda felt compeled to do it.lol.forgive me?lol.
          H.


  • XxDying InsidexX
    April 17, 2007
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    nice

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