You say you want to know about me?
Well get ready for a little story.
Charmingly simple yet overly complex i must be,
for i strive to be quite gentlemanly.
Lonely yet always friendly,
drifting from friend to friend,
you see.
A voracious reader i have always been,
and will always be.
Far more intelligent,
though dimwitted i do appear to be.
A dark shell that holds a pearl within.
Well get ready for a little story.
Charmingly simple yet overly complex i must be,
for i strive to be quite gentlemanly.
Lonely yet always friendly,
drifting from friend to friend,
you see.
A voracious reader i have always been,
and will always be.
Far more intelligent,
though dimwitted i do appear to be.
A dark shell that holds a pearl within.
Author notes
'Patent Pending is an awesome group'I dont think i used "the" at all in it.lol.
A contest entry
- Who Are You??? For BIG POINTS :) by GiftedPsychosis.
4000 points, ended May 23, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is very well done without using the word THE at all... i can see why it made a trophy write...
cheers
Jen

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Wow thats amazing...I always use "the" lol. But congrats with that. I like your poem I really like this part " Lonely yet always friendly " its kind of like you are but you arn't. Or a little bit or nothing. But goodluck in the contest.
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Voracious reader, eh?
Fantasy, I presume.. Any favorite authors?
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are you sure you want to ask that question.think about it.personal collection of over 500 books.thats just is what i keep in my room.that is a rough estimate there are proly more in storage but if you want to continue i will answear.lol.
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Bring it on..
Only 500? I think I have that many in one of my series..
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bs.the only ppl i can think of haveing more than a hundred would be R.A. Salvatore or Piers Anthony.kids series and plays dot count.lol
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Mine is bigger..
Hehe... I've read a bunch of Piers Anthony and RA Salvatore. Seriously, though, my house is overfilled with books, even after we weeded out the ones we didn't like. -
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i have read all of their books.lol.plus i go to hastings and barnes and noble and other book stores and just sit down in there and read a book til i get bored.and these are all mine.not a comunity(not your like your families."even after we weeded out the ones we didn't like")so ha i win by default that mine is my own personal collection and yours is shared w/other ppl.lalalalalalala(m victory song.lol.)
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Eh.
I tired quickly of Salvatore and Anthony. Mercedes Lackey, Tanya Huff, Terry Goodkind, Terry Pratchett, and Laurell K. Hamiliton are more to my taste.. -
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lacky,goodkind,hamiliton...anita couldnt gewt enough guys around her to screw could she?lol.plus Robert Jordan,David and Leigh Eddings,all of the star wars books(to many authors),jhon marco,mitchel gramh,tolkien,neil shusterman,terry brooks,turdi canavan,margaret weis and tracy hickman,plato,aristotle,T.A. baron,anne rice,all of the forgotten realms books(well most of them)....cant think of anything else off the top of my head.lol.
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Jordan good,love David Eddings, couldn't get into Brooks, read some of Weis/ Hickman, Anne Rice bores me.. I also like Jim Butcher, Harry Harrison, Anne McCaffrey, Charlaine Harris, Kim Harrison, Tamora Pierce (sadly, I've read most of the young adult section), Robert Asprin, Brian Jacques... Too many to list right away. Many of them I checked out from the library, so I suppose they don't count in our little contest.
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all those i named and own.lol.haha.of course they dont count.remember im cruel.loli to have read alot of the young adult section.lol.and i hate brian jacques with a flippin passion.*growls^99999*
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But...
All the little mousies love you. ^_^
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Love it brooksy! TTYL
meg
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Good Job!
Extra points for no the lol !! This was a short yet descriptive write... We love the last line !!! Please change rEEder to rEAder for us and we'll come back later and you won't appear as dimwitted LOL !
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fixed it for you.you had me laughing through the whole comment.lol.
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Well, you had us laughing while we were reading
It was so funny --- we got a kick out of your quick typing and it gave us the giggles and then you would put the word dimwitted in there ... so we really laughed ...
- thanks for the silliness of the evening!!! And we knew what you meant we aren't really counting for spelling , but thanks for fixing it
dragonfly
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well i must confess.i put that like that because i have a fairly large sense of humor.lol.but then yall said to change it so you know i kinda felt compeled to do it.lol.forgive me?lol.
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nice
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thanx.
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