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Old Noah

Rain
Came down
Forty days
 And Forty nights


Flooded all the Earth
Noah had his family
 Aboard the Ark friend, you see
Floated on the Sea

Released a Dove
Looked for it
back with
Love

Author notes

This contest is a real challange. Hope I counted correctly.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    Lovely Message ~

    The aesthetic eye appeal and numerous times

    of IM'ing to help with syllables...etc... are the only things

    I can hit you on with this poem ~

     

    However, because of the numerous times that

    there were corrections, 3 pts. deducted for that ~

     

    Rules state only once for showing the Poet

    their mistakes ~

     

    However....

     

    the message is beautiful and I

    think after all the editing, this

    came out to be a very nice entry, with

    the exception of the structures form ~

     

    The best to you in this contest,

     

    Bear ~


    • Katie Lazette
      April 26, 2007
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      Thank You

      Bear for your kind comment, your help. I appreciate them both. Rules are rules and I accept your decision whatever it is. It was my pleasure to enter the contest.


  • bethan-gaze
    April 22, 2007

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    Exquisite! You make this look easy - it flows really well and you even got a great bible image in there! Hats off!

    • Katie Lazette
      April 22, 2007
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      Thank You

      So glad you enjoyed my poem bethan, thanks for your comment and for reading it.


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry ~

    Thank you so much for your entry ~

    I will review your entry for certain criteria

    expected from this contest ~

    If you do not hear back from me within

    12 hours of the contest deadline, you

    should not have anything to worry about,

    as long as EVERYTHING in the

    RULES have been followed ~

    I will review syllable count many times,

    AND, if there is/are any line/s missing a syllable/s,

    I will let you know only ONCE!

    I am looking forward to reviewing your entry ~

    However, Judging will NOT take place until

    closing of this contest, therefore,

    I will TRY not to read the Theme

    or Storyline until that time.....however,

    .....sometimes I get tempted to break

    my own rules and take a peek ~

    SMILE...God loves YOU! 

    The best of luck to you in this contest!

    Sincerely,

    Bear ~

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