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Runing with the Wind

Time is moving
But you're not
We're all leaving
But we're all you've got

The wind is blowing
Blowing us away
We gotta Get out of here
We can't stay

We're running with the wind
Aging with father time
Life is meant for living
We live it in our prime

Why do you want to stay?
Why do you want to miss out?
So much you need to see
To find out what it's about

We're running with the wind
Aging with father time
Life is meant for living
We live it in out prime




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  • Kevan
    April 24, 2007

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    :)

    Yay, I like this. I won't hold back. I will run with the wind and age with father time. Where did you get that anyways? Aging with father time... does he age? Does he live forever? Anyways, that boggles me Oh well, good job!!!

    ~Kevan!~


  • penman gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    Excellent

    I like the repeat of the "we live it in our prime." Really does have a very effective impact on the poem.