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Musings on The Marriage of Figaro by Mozart

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The concert hall is brightly lit as well-dressed folks file in,

And from the distant crowded stage I hear a tuneless din.

I very quickly take my seat, then find myself enthralled,

By beauty that surrounds me in this vibrant, glowing hall.

The gilded trim is spark’ling in the much reflected light

That dances from the chandelier, like brilliant candlelight.

The frescos and the bric-a-brac, regaled like King Tut’s tomb –

Dancing cherubs, pixies, elves, midst verdant flowers bloom.

Then amidst the murmuring, the crowd in disarray,

The concertmaster rises, and then deftly bows an A.

So instantly the chaos leaves, the orchestra is one,

We restless watchers settle back, the music has begun.

A watchful hush now fills the room, and swallows all who wait

To see the maestro who, tonight, is obviously late.

At last he’s there, with red-faced grin, he strides across the stage,

Two taps of slender black baton, he eyes the op’ning page.

In unison the reeds begin, all sax and clarinets,

Now joined by flute and oboe in harmonious quartet.

The walls then vibrate to the sound, of drum and timpani,

Full orchestra’s crescendo rings through loge and balcony.

Then measure upon measure flows, I close my eyes in awe

As sounds of violin and horn regale me without flaw.

The clave's crisp resounding clack, the piccolo’s shrill voice,

In Figaro’s sweet marriage song, the notes all call, "REJOICE!"

In sixteenth notes and then in eighths, a blur of hand and bow,

The pulsing sounds begin to grow, a bold fortissimo.

The trumpets soar triumphantly, in thirds they ring on high.

The very walls and ceiling shake as tubas boom reply.

My pounding heart, buoyed by the sounds, seems now to fill my chest.

I sense that somehow here tonight my spirit’s being blessed.

The scale descends, the music pounds, staccato notes resound,

From back to front and side to side, they echo and redound.

Too soon they sound, three final chords that mark the piece’s end

Applause and bravos now ring out, an awe inspiring blend.

More scores will come, the night is young, so please don’t get me wrong,

But none can touch me like this one, like Mozart’s marriage song.

Author notes

This took a little work to get done - whew!

My most sincere thanks to a wonderful friend, Nicole Seeley, who's help was invaluable in the music portion of the write, understanding what was happening, the instruments involved and finally providing me with a clip of the actual piece and copies of portions of the score to use in the background. and thanks to Nic.

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    Flawless writing! Magnificent

    As good as the music coming through it! My favorite composer is Tchaikovsky. Also love Bach, Chopin, Beethoven, Mozart -- many others.


  • Tarja
    November 11, 2007

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    Congrats on the gold. This was so amazing. The imagery was just outstanding and of course the the message was inspiring. Well done! Thank you for entering.

  • magneticblue
    May 31, 2007

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    Wonderful, wonderful imagery! You're descriptions were very well done and didn't leave anything out, you also showed a good knowledge of what you were talking about (instruments and such) which helped. I love the Marriage of Figaro and I can definately understand why you would want to "REJOICE!" while listening to it. Good write and also really good use of vocabulary.


  • 5th position Gb
    May 31, 2007

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    This was great in my opinion. Our band recently performed an arrangement of this song, so I can really relate to the poem. It's a great song and this poem captures it so well. I liked your use of the instruments and certain musical terms to explain what is going on.


  • Hetha gold member
    May 31, 2007

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    A well deserved gold trophy, but I think you deserve so much more for this piece. A flawless gem in my bookmarks, I can see why it is highly acclaimed! Bravo!


  • Aesthete
    May 31, 2007
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    ah, brings back some very pleasant memories. Thank you

  • bloodstaindmind
    May 31, 2007

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    This poem is beyond amazing. With your imagery, I truly felt as though I was there at the concert and you're picture you used above fit this piece so perfectly. You are an amazing writer.


  • Mrs Mulholland
    May 31, 2007

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    You must have a most unusual version of the score of The Marriage of Figaro! It was written in the late eighteenth century, a full hundred years before the saxophone was invented. Perhaps the "maestro" you heard conducting it was a bit of a freak. Having re-read my comment, I forgot to add that (apart from the sax bit) I thought it was well-written and I loved the photo - which concert hall is it?


  • shuvi
    May 31, 2007

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    AWESOME!

    SPECTACULAR! A TRUE POETIC MASTERPIECE!!! like a ballad.. it reminded me of samuel taylor coleridge's 'The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner'.. very very beautfiully written! keep the pen rolling, all the best in the contest, lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi


  • May 30, 2007

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    Excellent! Bravo,Bravo, wonderfully well written

    Any friend of Mazart is a friend of mine! Wolfee would be proud of such an educated and well written critque


  • ShatterglassSecret
    May 30, 2007

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    this is spectacular! you captured the exact ecstasy of a live orchestral concert. bravo, bravissimo!

  • Sharo
    May 30, 2007
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    EXCELLEN


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 21, 2007

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    Paul ~

    This is absolutely breathtaking ~

     

    I attend the Crystal Cathedral, which you

     can view on television called...*The Hour of Power*

     

    It is there, that I am in awe at such an

    orchestrated, well-oiled machine ~

     

    I felt as if I was right there in the Symphony Hall with you

    as we sat and felt Life enter the Auditorium

    as each instrument was raised to call out to the heavens above ~

     

    I am a Schubert & Chopin fan myself,

    as well as many others of course.... 

    ......and as Jeannie said....this entry is

    worth far much more than GOLD ~

     

    Congratulations and thanks for all your hard work

    which you put into this piece of Art ~

     

    Well done ~

     

     

    The concertmaster rises, and then deftly bows an A.

    So instantly the chaos leaves, the orchestra is one,

    We restless watchers settle back, the music has begun.

     

     

    Splendid indeed,

    Bear ~

     


  • Everwind Rising
    April 21, 2007

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    Congratulations on the Gold. This piece has a vibrancy throughout. Being a musician myself, I can relate to the feelings experienced upon hearing a powerful piece of ochestra music. I love all the musical terminology you use in this piece.

  • oldpoets
    April 20, 2007

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    Like the others on this website. I could hear the music. This is awsome The work you put into this write.
    Bravo Bravo bravo


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    April 20, 2007

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    Oh dear Lord! this is the best poem I have ever read on this miserable site! I absolutly love it. The flow is perfect! the words are amazing, and it almost makes me never wish to write again knowing I can never reach this level of finnese! amazing!

  • pruedence
    April 20, 2007

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    This is wonderful, well written, I could hear the music ...So much detail...good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing


  • DarkHunter
    April 20, 2007

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    This is absolutely incredible, you have done a spectacular job on this. Never read anything like this before, in awe of your remarkable talent. So detailed and just perfect. Congratulations on producing one hell of a fine masterpiece. Best of luck in the contest. Bravo. James.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    April 20, 2007

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    Wonferful...

    This is wonderful...music is wonderful and can mean so much to a person...

    Good luck to you in the contest


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 19, 2007

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    WOW! Who says you can't get what you ask for! This is beautiful. The flow, the wonderful music everything!! WOW! Well done. Thanks so much for this entry and good luck!

    Jeannie


  • Veronica Leigh
    April 18, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS!!!!!!!! WOW! I felt as if I were there!!!!!!!! Wish I was!!!! Awesome job. Seriously, I felt as if I could actually hear the music!


  • ThankfulSoul
    April 18, 2007

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    I love this poem. i played the marriage fo figaro in wind ensemlble a year ago. I like the descpiotions you gave and i like how it brought the tun to my head, since i know. it is one of my favorite peices i have played. i play clarinet btw. well done. take care


  • Pretty Little Thing
    April 18, 2007

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    Excellent.

    You've crafted a superior piece of poetry,
    with rhyme and meter placed perfectly;
    and though the style's not quite my cup of tea,
    I still must tip my hat to thee.

  • ocerus
    April 18, 2007

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    This is pretty good, though it does come off a little bit forced and manipulative. but it's obvious that you have a lot of skill, and it's pretty good. - oce


  • Phineas Red
    April 18, 2007

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    This was quite well done, I myself am a fan of mozart, and found this an excellent tribute to the Mrriage of Figaro.

  • mcheadle
    April 18, 2007

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    I THROW ADOZEN RED ROSES TO YOU AND YOUR FRIEND

    YOU TWO HAVE COMPLETED THE GREATES MASTER PIECE, NOW THE REST OF US MAY UNDERSTAND HOW IT IS ALL MIXED AO WELL BRAOV!!!!! I TIP MY GLASS OF MILK TO YOU.


  • Ishtar
    April 17, 2007

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    Wonderfully done, sir!
    Another piece to illustrate what amazing talent you have. I'm not surprised at all. I expected this splendid word from Mr. Splendid Poet!

    And, of course, Kudos for Nicole and her help!
    -Reni


  • Lysithea
    April 17, 2007

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    ♥Beautiful♥

    Ahhh.. You write so amazingly! Holy crap, I could hear the piece in my head while I was reading I absolutely LOVE how the background turned out, too. Bravo, Sir Paul, bravo. Thanks for the shout out too.. teehee.. you are just too sweet

    's and ♥ to you, Sir!

    <3

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