As I was running through the woods
Hoping he wont get me
Just running and running hoping and hoping
I wont tirp and fall
Then I will loose it all
And as he was slowly stabbing
Me I thought how I just lost it all
Then he finally ran away as I was lying in a puddle of blood
Hoping it will all be over soon
Than finally my eyes start closing slowly
And my heart stops beating as I take my last breath
Please tell me what you think
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Great write!!!!! Its like a story the imagery was awsome! Your poem was very well written and I can't wait to read more! Keep writing oh yeah I really liked how it was so scary..it would really be frightning being chaced by someone and running for your life wow!! anyways once again great write
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wow that is really deep
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It gave me goosebumps ^.^
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