As i lie awake
I never seem to now about you and me
When im lying in the dark and cold room all alone
I can hear the beat of the lost soul
I cant stop thinking about what used to be
All I can hear is the beat of the lost soul
Going boom boom and some times in pain
The lost soul the lost soul in pain and agony
Please tell me what you think
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awww. very sad write. The only suggestion I have is that I think you could use some more effective line breaks to give it a bit more power.
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