I cant sleep knowing whats to come
tomarro I am no longer a child
I will have more obstacles to overcome
and my parties wont be as wild.
I will have to care for more then just me
and do things on my own.
My heart is jumping with glee
for now i know i have grown.
My moms eyes swell with tears
as I blow out the candles.
she has done so much throughtout the years
and i knew i was hard to handle.
I would love to thank my mom
for being there when i was down
for the money she spent for my prom
for that was the most beautiful gown.
Author notes
just a nice poem that came to mind
A contest entry
- Greet my Mum by andie11.
355 points, ended June 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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mums are the best and this explains it beautifully!
Jules xx
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How sweet
you are right this is a nice poem, thanks for entry and good luck in my contest -
2 Thumbs, a toe, and an ear hair up!!!
This was sweet! It sounds like you have a really great Momma! I know I do!
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well done good luck
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verbiage is lacking
Very nice sentiment, but you HAVE to spell and use English correctly. I like the overall message. -
This is cute
I'm sure she will be pleased with this. The Shaker
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Aw, thank you for giving thanks to your mom! Unfortunately, a good parent can be the rarity, not the commonplace -- so it's great to hear that yours showed you love. It makes me want to write my mom an e-mail to tell her how much I appreciate her too. :-
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Very touching
This was a very heart felt and thoughful poem. Good luck in the contest.
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