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Tar

 



 

 

Listen carefully to the wind's breath,

deserts of unearthly silence.

 

I am blackened by dark words,

ink stained fingers dipped in tar.

 

Rough contrast of skin and cloth,

wrapped in broken memories.

 

My silent words spoken. 

 

 

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  • Ohriginality
    April 18, 2007
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    ah-maze-ing.

  • Gaia gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    wow

    it's totally awesome, i luv it...good luck in the contest, i hope you win..


    red roses


  • Domine Pestilentia
    April 17, 2007
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    amazing

    smooth, descriptive, powerful, interesting and unique
    thats how i descrive this piece
    born in the deepest of the art beneath your soul, this poem enchanted me like a full moon over the river.
    the picture is awesome, and it makes contrast over the poem..
    thanks for entering, and good luck