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To The Laneyshape

All i will say is i'm sorry,
and hope it will be enough.
I'm sorry.

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don't ask about the title, you won't understand

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    April 30, 2007
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    Nicely done.

    I never really care about the title, so I wouldn't have asked I care more about the words. Sometimes apologies are the best and hardest thing a person could do; sometime the second hardest is accepting an apology. I hope someone accepted yours.
    -BabyBear


  • Old Fool
    April 17, 2007

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    Hmm. Depends what you're saying sorry for..
    As to the title, I read something about some fantasy land. Rings a bell somehow.
    But yes, sometimes sorry is all we can say, however its meant.
    Lov
    x
    Ev {o!-}


  • RhiannonMari
    April 17, 2007

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    you're right there, i don't understand the title... lol. but the poem is sweet. sometimes all we can say is sorry... whether it's enough or not, it's all we can say. *shrugs* very nice.