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Sweetest Spring Bouquet

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I'm blessed to have my daughter by my side,

Oh, how she brightens up my every day.

My love for her will never be denied,

I'm blessed to have my daughter by my side.

 

My heart's replete with joy her smiles provide,

Her kisses are the sweetest spring bouquet.

I'm blessed to have my daughter by my side,

Oh, how she brightens up my every day.

 

She's growing faster than my heart would like,

I pray the Lord to keep her safe from harm.

I wish that she could stay a little tyke,

She's growing faster than my heart would like.

 

I watch her ride away upon her bike,

Deep down I cannot help but feel alarm.

She's growing faster than my heart would like,

I pray the Lord to keep her safe from harm.

 

My favorite times are ones I spend with her,

It doesn't really matter what we do.

We love to talk about the days that were,

My favorite times are ones I spend with her.

 

To think of her will cause my heart to stir,

It's she that makes me smile when I am blue.

My favorite times are ones I spend with her,

It doesn't really matter what we do.

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 29, 2008

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    This is a very nice forms, and I liked it. I am sure your daughter is a gift to you. I know how fast children grow.
    Kelli


  • macandrew
    April 18, 2007

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    As a father for the third time this poem really touched my heart. You nailed the form and gave me some images and feelings to hold on to.

    thanks for entering.
    John

  • jodygirl
    April 18, 2007

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    What a lovely edict for your daughter. A framed copy of this poem would make a beautiful gift for her. Which I'm sure you've already thought of. Bless both of you and always stay as close as you are.
    In God's Love.
    Joan


  • going nowhere
    April 17, 2007
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    This is precious. The love you have for your daughter is beautiful. Great job.


  • thelordreigns gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Flawless and lovely

    What a wonderful gift for your daughter. This is a wonderful poem. It made me smile inside and out.

    - joanne

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