gigantic granite
mass of spellbinding wonder~
the sky at midnight
Author notes
5-7-5 haiku, i think you've got all 3 here, haiku, starry night, and the 10 words.
A contest entry
- Short Form by Domine Pestilentia.
700 points, ended April 22, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Hiaku, 10 word poem, Or Just a Stary Night Poem by Frozen Fire Poet.
315 points, ended July 1, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was fun to read and it was good. nice hiaku.
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Congratulations Alex. Rock on.
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Just so and a mastery of so few words,
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I like this haiku very much. I don't know why you use the word "granite", but it works!
Well done,
Bill
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I love your Haikus! You make it look easy...but I know how difficult they are, having never been able to master them. Wonderfully descriptive. Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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~~~~~~~Splendid, bro!~~~~~~~
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Definity short and powerful.
Love that first line alliteration...
Great job.
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purely amazing
haikus.. a few words, expressing feelings long as life time.
i could see the sky you were talking about, i love how you got to describe it, i will never be able to see the sky normaly anymore.. take it as a good thing!
thanks for entering, and good luck!
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