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For My Love Helen

I'm writing this poem, to try and describe,
All these feelings I'm feeling deep down inside,
This love that I'm feeling for you,
I really don't know what to do,
With you, for you, to you and holding you,
All is better than being alone.

To kiss, to cuddle, to love and to care,
To find someone to share these will always be rare,
Words can't describe these feelings I have,
Being without you is driving me mad.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 11, 2007

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    thank you so much for your wonderful entry into this contest. i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie

  • good write good luck in my contest.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 18, 2007
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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY !

    Oh this is really sweet! You have chosen such lovley words to describe your feelings. I sure hope the one you wrote if for gets to read it.
    Well done to you!

    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene