Every concrete laugh
is an angel above glass eternity.
Author notes
Laughter is the best medicine for the soul.
Every good solid laugh
remains light like an angel
and wont break the fragileness of eternity
but only strengthen our existence.
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
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Love it.
The expansion of (or inspiration for) the poem in the author's box gives the poem a much more understandable meaning. I loved it. Truely I did.
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F***in' brilliant! this should do very well indeed,
ya b*****d, lol,
Alex
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LMAO... You crack me up.
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i don't mean to sound stupid, but i don't quite understand the references there with calling a laugh concrete and glass eternity? i agree laughter is the best medicine as they say... could you elaborate on your meaning here for me, please?
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Every good solid laugh
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and wont break the fragileness of eternity
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than you so much! that helps a great deal! you know, you could even put that as a poem in itself! beautifully put! thanks for explaining!
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