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You.

On this young earth, in this short life,
You are my fledgling diamond, my every facet.

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    April 30, 2007

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    Sweet.

    This is just lovely. I loved your usage of a diamond because I felt like you went beyond the cliche. This was a sweet love poem. It made me smile.
    -BabyBear


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    April 19, 2007

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    Amazing

    what punch we can pack into a one liner...well, in this case a two liner...Very good and Very powerful


  • suzume
    April 17, 2007
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    this is very elegent - very lovely. best of luck.


  • RhiannonMari
    April 17, 2007
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    ooo pretty. well done!