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[[.Love Grenades.]]

The [fireworks] lift the s.k.y, light seeping into this life of d'a'r'k'ness.
    //Grenades// go off thorughout my body, Baby I >>> love <<< you.
         

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    April 30, 2007

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    Interesting!

    And I mean interesting in a good way. I loved your unique usage of punctuation. The combination of explosives and love is one I don't see enough, since I think they obviously connect. Cute love poem!
    -BabyBear


  • SarahEatsAirplane
    April 17, 2007

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    Wow i realy like this, even though I usually dont go for short things. lol i can picture this whole thing. good job darling i love you.


  • RhiannonMari
    April 17, 2007

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    i don't quite understand the use of the many different punctuations there... but for what it's saying, is very sweet.