Your eyes reflected hatred upon my soul
my innocence you took and threw in a bottomless hole.
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
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amazing
your two lines sound better than a whole page. i've never read such a short poem that had such meaning and depth to it..good job<3
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powerful
The fact this was in two lines gave the meaning in such a direct way it almost punches the reader in the heart. You managed a rhyme scheme while still saying what you wanted to say.
-Baby Bear -
beautiful, strong & sad. it's amazing what we can put into two small lines, isn't it? well done!
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