don't shut your door to love
it'll just find a window!
Author notes
one of the first things that came to mind when i saw this. actually, first thing i thought of, somebody else had said, so didn't wish to use someone else's words. hope you like it! *smiles softly*
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Clever! That's a very interesting two-liner...I like this much. There's always a way to see someone even if they don't want you to see them Like a window...it's an opening. Great job!!
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thank you! don't know how those two lines came to be, but they did. thanks for the comment! *smiles*
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cute
Isn't this true? I liked it, short and sweet. The exclaimation point helped get your meaning across.
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*smiles* thank you. it is true, that's for sure! glad you liked it!
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Ah so sweet yet so profound. So much said within those two little lines. Well done sis, this was fab.
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thanks! *smiles*
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Now there's deep thinking! Excellent!
Love
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Ev {o!-}
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thank you! *smiles*
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i'm glad yours is kind of an uplifting message. ^^ i haven't read the others yet, but i like this and i wish you luck.
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thanks! it's not often that my poetry is so uplifting! so i was rather happy with it myself. *smiles* and thanks!
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Sometimes shutting the door is the best thing to do because if you try to find love it becomes illusive yet if you shut the door in indifferece it comes crawling in through the window in search of you.
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so very true! thank you for your comment!
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Love allways finds a way...You can not stop it...
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Love is like water
Buoyant, and free, yet tangible and warm when needed. Can even be described with liquid, nice job.
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very true
I love this. There is no stopping love. It is the most powerful force in the universe.
Well done!
-joanne
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thank you!
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nice one.
heehe, nice one!, yea, it'll get ya somehow,
good work, good luck!
Alex.
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thanks! right back atcha! good luck!
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