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tales of the scribe

oh the stories that fill the mind
of the scribe that keeps the remembrance
words of choice to again remind
holding all things in balance

songs of praise to the great one
tales valorous deeds of yore
of how it had all begun
wonders of the past to explore

as memory tells the tale
around the leaping firelight
of those that passed beyond the vale
in our honor is the scribe's delight

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 18, 2007

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    oh yes, indeed, we do mark memorials..of people, palces and things that have passed on...well done, but not freeverse, actually.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    This is wonderful. Terrific images and flow.
    Beautifully written.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • Nature Song silver member
    April 17, 2007

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    Stories told by the light of a fire. Written down generations later. Chosen scribes to remind us to remember what we tend to forget. Wonderful poem, so well penned. ~Sie


  • Desire gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Wow!

    What a powerful verse penned!!
    Loved the images and the feeling after inhaling these words
    Magnificently done!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    awesome

    Such an excellent poem, Mom...


    "as memory tells the tale
    around the leaping firelight
    of those that passed beyond the vale
    in our honor is the scribe's delight"

    Beautiful!

    Lynda


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