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inside your mind, it's a
kaleidoscope of hurt and confusion
faceless lovers you never touched
and kisses you'll never remember
now you're filled too full with distrust
a distant longing for closeness
for  humanity :
filled too full with
a fear of attachment and
old smoky memories; of women
who are strangers of the same blood

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  • disparate
    June 15, 2007
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    you have an interesting mind, and a way with words.

    'filled too full with
    a fear of attachment and
    old smoky memories; of women
    who are strangers of the same blood ' most of the time. not always, i wish to forget my memories, and just live for the present.

  • silversoliloquysong
    April 20, 2007

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    ouch... this evokes a painful loneliness that is unintentionally self-enforced because of subconscious fears. good write!