Since the day that you left me
questions have been running through my head
could I have mad things better while you were here
was I a bad girl, is that why you left me..
Daddy please answer my questions
because these thoughts are killin me inside
that is a questions in which can not be answered
the truth lies deep within
locked up with no escape
why do I continue to torture myself like this
maybe because I like the feeling of pain
or maybe because this is one of those things to hard to overcome.....
.... this is about what happened with my dad... he passes away march 11 1999 at the age of 40... im now 19 and it still kills me inside...
Comments
-
awww so sad and full of emotions this was a great poem and I know it must be really really hard to live with this I dont know what I would do at least you have your friends to support ya
-
Im sorry about the loss of you dad, but I think he would be very proud you and your poetry. great write.

-
So sorry about your dad. I am sure one day the pain will lessen. He will always be in your heart. Writing is a great way to get your feelings out as you know. Great job.
Aunt Jeannie
-
this was a good poem and im sorry bout your dad its not fair on you..hopefully your pain get better...nice background..guess now im gonna have to change my author page again cuz im trying to be original

~Chrissy~




