She’s the world to me
So don’t you fuck her up
She can’t take your animosity
She don’t want you to wind it up
Love, hate, they’re both readied emotions
Two daunting ingredients in her writhing potion
Don’t let it boil over, for it’s sure to be painful
Please watch over her, she’s really not a handful
With a bow in her hair and a twinkle in her eye
She’ll tell you the truth, she’ll never spout a lie
So don’t cry out
Cease fire
Author notes
this is about one of my best friends, Alesandra Vela. we nicknamed her Alice (hence the title of the poem.)
i hope you all enjoy reading it!
♥Plastic♥
A contest entry
- Clinic Paranoia and A Touch of Pretty Heroin by anima bella.
400 points, ended April 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good job babes.
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Awh. So cute! ^.^
Love, hate, they’re both readied emotions
Two daunting ingredients in her writhing potion
Best line. Oh yeah.
xoxo,
Your Dumpster dol -
nice title....
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omg!
very great i love this poem!
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ha i def loved the title love! very cleever
She’s the world to me
So don’t you fuck her up
i love those lines because i wish to god someone would say that about me to someone else. it has this cute harshness, & protective love for someone. great write my dear
<3
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With a bow in her hair and a twinkle in her eye
She’ll tell you the truth, she’ll never spout a lie
So don’t cry out
Cease fire
cute cute cute dollie!!!!
I would give this all applause but sice my free ones have run out and IM saving for a contest, can you wait a bit for them??
I love you doll this is an amazing wirte!!! -
So don’t cry out
Cease fire
not sure why - but it sticks out. I like the ending a lot
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aww i thats nice to write a poem about someone. i wish someone would me at least. very nice and heartfelt
xoxox keep writting -
Great job. Another wonderful write.
Love from your beautiful sister, Chelsea
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awwww.
this is sweet.
♥
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