The person that I want to woo me,
Doesn't even know how i feel for him,
He just laughs and turns the cheek the other way.
I want to cry out and let him know,
But I don't want to scare him away,
So I cry on the inside and just go on laughing on the outside.
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Ok so this just started out as a spelling word sentence so umm yeah PLEASE tell me what you think!!!
Please tell me what you think
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so this is not true anymore right? i do really like this and i do know how you feel well loves to you
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Holas! I like it but so many of your poems are about masks and sadness on the inside! Be happy *sob* You made me cry now *sniff* AND NOW I HAVE A FRIGGIN RUNNY NOSE TY TY TY!!! *grr*
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Christina.....ahh...your a retard...jk...or am I hmmmmmm...you spelt cheek wrong! But I love you! And how many times do I have to tell you NO MORE DEPRESSING POETRY! Thats my job!
Not yours mine MINE!!!!!!!!
luv ya!
Muah!
BERRIES AND CREAM!
♥ Natalie
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awww babe i'm sorry i know how you feel...
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In the third line you misspelled cheek. And if you were looking for suggestions on a title, I think "Crying Out" would fit perfectly.
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thank you a lot i took you advice for the title, and fixed the misspelled word.
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