My favorite place,
to write is outside.
On the grassy hill
Of my backyard.
Surrounded by flowers,
The view so great.
A beautiful blue lake,
Unfolds before me.
Sitting upon,
That grassy hill...
My mind is free,
To wander as it pleases.
The birds fly overhead,
The wind gently blows...
The perfect poetic scenery,
For a curious poet like me.
Author notes
option #5
A contest entry
- Rounds contest (first round) by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended April 22, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice
This is very nice. The simplicity makes it even more powerful in the imagery and thoughts behind the inspiration. Very nice. *finalist* -
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Thanks!
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I love your description of your favorite place to be. Your poetry produces a beautiful and serene image. Good job!
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thanks!
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