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Eyes Behold

Your eyes tell everything about you
they say if your happy, sad, or angry

You can tell if someone loves you
you just need to look into their eyes

You can tell if someone is upset
just look into their eyes

Eyes come in many different shades
from light blue to dark green and all in between

So next time you look at a friend
or someone you don't even know

Look deep inside them and yourself
and you may just see what you see in yourself

So think before you say
and look into their gorgous eyes




Author notes

Aboutpeople's eyes and what beholds within.

I would like to be your mother or your cousin (I most likely will add more to this poem)

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  • Awww, Thanks!


  • Naridill
    May 6, 2007

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    This poem was written so simple but it has a powerful meaning that has a meaning within it. I really like it and think you did an awesome job on it.
    Well done and goodluck in contest.

  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 26, 2007
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    Thank you!!


  • shattered logic
    April 26, 2007
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    I like this piece, this has a simple meaning to it, but it goes a long way.
    The eyes are the gateway to peoples soul and heart. It's saying to me look in someone eyes before you judge them, and it also just talks about eyes perfect. Good Job and good luck!!

  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 17, 2007
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    Thanks so much! Like I said I may continue with this poem


  • bloved
    April 17, 2007

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    very sweet and very true. your eyes are the ones that give away your soul! i wrote a poem about eyes too awhile ago. it was about brown eyes! well great job

    **Bloved**

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