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Hot Air

It's very easy to reuse hot air and turn it into anything
Who knows what it will turn into?
Maybe political propaganda
Pseudoscience
Or even more hot air
Pseudoscience. The possibilities are endless.

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  • HaleyMary
    April 17, 2007

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    Good write. This makes me think of how nothing ever seems to change in society and the hot air makes me think of heated debates people have about the state the world is in these days. Whether we should take the side of war or of peace, and if there's a line between the two that can tell us when either one is right or wrong to choose. Very thought provoking write. Keep up the great work.


  • Arsenic-
    April 17, 2007
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    Many Claps.