My entire world spins around you
It is not your eyes or your smile or your words
That made me love you.
It is simply you,
Not any part of you, not your shadow, not your thoughts
It is only you whom I want.
There is no place of memories in my soul
As it swells with your love.
I don't want to embrace death in your love
There is more left on the earth with you,
With you I would like to see myself alive
Smiling, crying and living my life.
I would like to be surrounded by the little angels, who'll look like you
And I would like to count the hours of rejoice when my days will be few.
Many years later from now on
I see you and me sitting with each other in our lawn.
There I would like my life to end
Lying on the chest of my life with every delight.
A contest entry
- Perfect by perfect relief.
475 points, ended May 2, 2007, 7 entries
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Nice use of proper grammar (for the most part). It's a very sweet idea that you have as far as you want your death to go. Many people seem to want to die in their sleep, but you want to do it in the arms of your lover. That's so very lovely.
Thanks for the entry and good luck to you! : -
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Thanks for commenting.
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VERY LOVING AND CARESSING POEM.Love pems are natural and expressed the feelings frankly and naturally through the medium of poetry. Does love alone spurs you to write or any other thing.If it is love alone then it is O.K.It definitely takes one to great heights
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this was a really nice poem, please return the favor
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