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Alone In the Bar

I am the creator of illusion
Images shaped and formed
My role is exhausting
And I am in constant battle with reality

I am the unspoken truth
Wanting in anticipation
Utterance of a natural disaster
And I yearn to speak for someone to hear

I am the eye that watches everything
And I learn from your behaviour
You are the reality
And I am in constant battle with me

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  • Speaking in Tongues
    April 18, 2007
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    I enjoyed this very much, very thoughtful and reflective. Thanks for the entry.


  • sublimewriter
    April 18, 2007

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    what is the unspoken truth? i was lost when i read this? is this poem about an eating disoder or a secret?