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Op-ache

A feeling without form
A thought without words
The struggle to express
without cliche...

It's there,
It's all there
the shadows, the light
the silhouettes of being
vying with each other
in a  world of voiceless wonder.

Words won't come
Even the heartache subsides,
desolation overwhelmed by lethargy,
a torpor of torment.

Throbbing blankness
smothers all

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  • sweet deception
    July 10, 2007

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    I believe I relate all too well. For the idea of the poem, you've managed to express it very well and with impeccable wording. Nicely done, I like this a lot.