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I found no answer

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Sweeping clean
her thoughts in prayer
Nourishing her inner soul
Even thinking of the dead
Obtaining everlasting bliss
through little notes
hidden
in the holy stones

But close your eyes
and broaden your horizon

Replace the stones by candles
her path by aisle of church
the sibhah by the rosary

Then tell me….

What the difference is
and why we fight religious wars
because

I have searched

but I've not found the answer

 

 

 

 

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Picture by Margaret Stone

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 17, 2007

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    Oh my, another powerful peice.....it has such potential....I am a little unsure of the capitalization changes....


    • JustADutchie gold member
      April 17, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment and you're right about the capitalization. I wrote this piece this morning, just before you closed the contest and then I had to go away.
      They're always fun those short contests.