I follow you
Into the old Gothic stone church
Your sanctuary
My hiding place
I see all
Haunt you at every turn
You cannot escape from me
I'm the thorn in your side
Run from me my love
For I have a dark wish
To torture your soul
Once I get you where I want you
My darkest desire will consume you whole
Your world will turn black
I will catch you alone
Trap you in a black and silver state of mind
I smile seductively,claw you to the floor
Then hurl you to the alter
My sharp teeth melt into your soft human flesh
Your blood tastes so sweet my dear
Your world will close in around you
Feed this sexual need
Surrender to my darkest desire
I lick the blood from your succulent skin
All the while you shade your face from me
Don't be afraid
I am nothing more than a hungry vampire
Your hellish internal desire
I can take you higher and make you immortal forever
As you reach up to stop me
Something moves under the flesh in my arms
You cry out in horror
Maggots,alive and eating me
Spiked caterpillars crawl into any nest
Within my body they can find
Indulge in my beauty
Feast your eyes upon me!
Tell me that I'm your Goddess
And lose yourself in me
Iv'e sold my body to you
So give me your soul!
Terror creeps
Terror is here
I am your black rose
You have a wild look in your eye
Finally you give into lust
You bite deep into my neck
The dark red nectar flows
Like the fluid runs from your body into mine
We are ripping each other to shreds
I feel you climax
I smile
Your one of us now
You are my darkest desire
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A contest entry
- ~Darkest Of Dark~ by XxMysticalFantasyxX.
450 points, ended April 30, 2007, 23 entries
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This was a really great poem! You have a great talent...It was so dark and graphic it really amazed me! I wish you the best of luck in this contest..this was a really great write
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One of my favorite kinds of stories are ones with vampires in them because they have such a wonderful way of making death sexual. The way they feed and take such passion in the kill is wonderful. Great write.
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You cannot escape from me
I'm the thorn in your side
that's my favorite line, I love it.
I love the way you write, the dark entrancing way the words flow Good job ;]
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Two thumbs up!
Wow... This is REALLY dark. Very nice write. Put together well. Good luck in the contest! -Nick
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Just so dark, haunting and very seductive, giving in to these desires inside, finding and looking for something, pleasure and place in someones heart and soul, to be together and forever one.......
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