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Love For Sale

A peddler wanders down main street
Yelling out raucously
“love potions get your love potions”
and  people come from near and far
to buy his wares

and hoping they work
for near everyone wants
love and its for sale
just see the peddler on main street

A contest entry

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  • Silly Rabbit.
    April 16, 2008
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    wow. this one has an offcolor canniness to it that akes it a great read


  • BrokenWings...Fly
    April 17, 2007
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    wow. this write is different, but it's great non-the-less ^^ good job


  • slipperssun gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    thats a different write... but i do agree with it... we are all looking for love, just depends where we find it... good luck with your contest
    cheers
    Jen