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Sweeter

The butterflies fly
Their graceful flight again
Dancing around, my inner mind

You, wrapping your warmth around me
Such a warm blanket in a cold.cold world
Heaven with you always n forever

Sweep me off to never never land,
And never take me back
For the reality here is so.so

much sweeter

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Yes yes yes, hmm hmm hmm. I.dont.dont.know

So interepret (sp?) how you will and tell me what you think

RAWR

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  • ConvenientExcuses
    April 18, 2007

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    I really really like this one. Imagery is amazing, it really creates a picture! great job! keep writing!
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