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The Road

walking

walking

walking ever on

no ware to go

but every ware

lost in night's darkness

lost in one's mind

lost ones mind

lost in beat thoughts

those thoughts that are beatrific

walking to a diffrent beat

living life to a diffrent beat

just being a being

on the road

always on the road

life is a road

has a begining

has a end

has many turning points

but it's all ways one way



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  • April 18, 2007
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    very beat writer style

  • mistic revelations
    April 18, 2007
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    wow

    that was really good man wow


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 17, 2007

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    Interesting take on this theme...yes, we are all walking one direction...but so many of detour and take the long way around.... "no ware " = nowhere....